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Offline Child Horus

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Celestial Strings
« on: December 10, 2017, 04:31:30 PM »
 
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CELESTIAL STRINGS

CELESTIAL STRINGS,
THAT BIND US FORTH,
FROM MAN TO MONAD,
THOUGH SOUL GIVES BIRTH,
TO HARMONIES SERENE,
BEYOND THE EARTH.

WHEN STRINGS MAKE CHORDS,
THAT HARPS DO PLAY,
WHICH HUM THROUGH LILA'S DANCE EACH DAY;
ORBITS IN ORBITS ROUND POLES IN POLES,
GIVE BIRTH TO THE COSMIC WORLD SOUL.

HER STRINGS ARE TUNED,
BEYOND THE STARS,
TO SUBTLE PLANES,
WHERE THOUGHTS GIVE CAUSE,
TO EVERY COLOR,
AND EVERY SOUL,
AND TO ALL FORMS,
WE SEE AND KNOW.

IN TONIC LIES,
A HUMMING WHORL,
WHERE ALL IS MOTION
YET ALL IS STILL.
« Last Edit: December 10, 2017, 04:33:10 PM by Child Horus »
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Offline gurudedicationananda

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Re: Celestial Strings
« Reply #1 on: December 20, 2017, 04:14:11 PM »
I like your poem, it's very nice.
I like how it is concise.
It also creates good imagery.
Keep it up!
 :)